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Hero ranking number 5
Firefighters and policemen love their job and are very committed to helping people. If they didn't like their job then they wouldn't be as committed to helping people and wouldn't get to the place they need to be as quickly and they wouldn't d oats much to keep people safe from danger.
Hero ranking number 4
Firefighters and policemen make people feel comfortable knowing that there is help right away if something happens to them. If people didn't know that if something bad were to happen to them that they couldn't get help people would feel a lot less safe about bad things happening. Just the thought of someone being able to protect them right away gives people a lot more comfort.
Heronranking number 3
Firefighters give us a lot of help by informing us about fire safety. Firefighters come to school and inform kids about what to do if there's a fire where they are. If firefighters didn't inform people on what to do and tell them that equipment they need for fires A lot more lives would've been lost from fires. Firefighter show exactly what you need to do with equipment for stopping fires. For example they teach you what is smoke alarm sounds like and they make sure that you will know where your fire extinguisher is in your house.
Hero ranking number 2
Firefighters and policemen are my heroes because of their bravery. Every year, there are about 17,000 calls for fires in public buildings. Firefighters have to go in a fire being brave and help others. Policemen are brave because they have to chase after and capture bad people that can hurt them. Many firefighters and policemen have lost their lives saving others.
Hero ranking #1
Firefighters and Policemen save so many lives. If we didn't have firefighters and Policemen so many more people would have died in big accidents or fires. For example if we didn't have fire fighters or Police men in 9/11 they wouldn't of been to save everyone and a lot more people would have got hurt. Also if a fire occurs in a house firefighters go in the house and save the people stuck in there.
Hero ranking number 1
Firefighters and Policemen save so many lives. If we didn't have firefighters and Policemen so many more people would have died in big accidents or fires. For example if we didn't have fire fighters or Police men in 9/11 they wouldn't of been able to save everyone and a lot more people would have got hurt. Also if a fire occurs in a house firefighters go in the house and save the people stuck in there. If a bad personal in doing bad things Policemen capture them and take them to jail.
Claim: firefighters are my heroes because of their bravery
Evidence: an example of firefighters bravery is that they are grave in saving others from fires. If a house is burning down they quickly go in there to try to save the people there, they could easily get hurt but they still are Brave and rich into the house. Policemen are brave because if someone is hurt they drive to the location they are hurt at as quick as possible. Also if someone bad has done something dangerous they tun after them even though they can get hurt.
Analysis: Firefighters and Policemen are very quick and get where they need to go as quick as possible. I know that if me or one of my family members get hurt they can come really quick and save us.