Claim: My brother is my hero for being a amazing brother and his outstanding out standing achievements. Evidence: Two examples of him being a hero to me is that he has got his masters degree at DePaul university which is a big college and everybody in my family has only got there bachelors degree. Anthoer reason for him being a hero to me is that he has built his own computer which in my opinion is amazing! Analysis: My brother built a computer when he was in high school and that’s really hard because he and to take care of me and my brothers because he was the oldest and he had to get ready for college so I find him being able to build a computer a hero. Also he was able to get a masters degree! That’s really important because if there was only 100 people on the planet scientist say only about 6 people would go to college and he also got a masters degree which is way harder then getting a bachelors which I find a really outstanding achievement.
My Brother Maxwell London was a really good friend with Gram who was his best friend through Highshcool. This is proof that Maxwell is a hero because when Maxwell moved out of state he still was friends with gram even though he was in college and hade to work. He is also a hero because every friend Maxwell had everyone trusted Max and if a lot of people would be able to trust someone then that would definitely be my hero.
My Brother Maxwell London had a Bar Mitzvah which is a celebration for when you become a man at the age of thirteen but in the he Jewish religion. When you have a Bar Mitzvah it’s really important because you have to go to a temple where a rabbi goes and celebrates with you and a Rabbi is a really important person in the Jewish religion a Rabbi is pretty much the leader in a temple so if a Rabbi goes and celebrates with you that’s a really big deal and everybody that my brother knew was there to congrats Maxwell. So a Bar Mitzah is a really big deal and you only have one Bar Mitzvah in your life!
While my brother Maxwell London was at college to get a bachelors at Loyola University he was spending time helping the environment by cleaning a lot of polluted lakes in Chicago. This is Evidence why my brother Maxwell London would be my hero because being able to use your spear time in college to go help planet Earth become more beautiful with out getting payed for doing that is a really superb thing to do.
My brother Maxwell London went to DePaul University to get his masters degree in Marine Biology and while he was getting his masters he found a fossil that was the shape of a strange fish which turned out to be a new type of fish! Of corse that fish no longer exist since it was a fossil but that was a really big outstanding achievement for my brother Max!
The reason why I thought my brother Maxwell London is my hero is because his is such a nice and amazing brother. You see brothers are sometimes mean (Not saying anything to Tyler) and Maxwell is such a nice brother because of so much reason like coming over for my birthday every year, being nice to me and taking care of all my brothers when I was little, teaching me more about science, helping my with my video games, and so much more. So in conclusion my brother Maxwell London is my hero.