By
Kayla Ball
My mom is my hero because she is very caring towards my family. Also her love for helping peole who needs it really stands out to me. Claim:My mom is my hero because of her noble quailitys. Evidence:Two reasons of my moms qualitys is her caring for my family and helping others. Analysis: My moms love for caring and helping others is a huge impact on why I choose her as my hero. Her noble qualities makes a huge impact in my family's life.
My mom always helps me and my brother with homework. I can always count on her to help me walk through the step to problems. She puts my homework help before her work. This is an example of altruism because she is putting my needs before hers.
My mom always comes to me and Ryan's dance comps and soccer games. Even if she is out of town she will some how get there. After seeing my mom come to all of our events it shows how much she cares about us. She sets a great example for me when im older because she shows me how important you children's events are.
My mom is a great role model for me because when she overcame breast cancer it showed me that if you dont give up you can do anything. My mom had a severe thing of breast cancer and it would be hard to overcome it but she did. Also, my mom had to do a ton of surgery and that shows me how strong my mom is. After seeing my mom overcome breast cancer it makes me feel like I can do anything.
My mom is a very good person. She follows the golden rule. She treats others they way she wants to be treated. For example when our family was in Mexico someone told her to go back to the long islands, but instead of being mean back to him she used her words. After she used her words the guy felt bad and apologized.
